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- The leaves coming down from the top of the photograph are nice, but where they obscure your(?) face is not, given that the photo is emotion-driven. Compositionally, they also lead out of frame.
- The flowers to the right are quite vibrant compared to the rest of the picture and attract a lot of attention in my opinion, I feel the vibrancy of the flowers needs to be toned down.
Other than that, I have no other thoughts on this piece. Hope this helps.
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Beautiful!